Nicely written, @jaysizemore.

Perfect choice to end on that line for the tone of your piece.

I just spent four hours and am headed out on my daily bike ride here in Japan, but if ya don't mind, you've inspired me to write a similar poem when I get home.

After it, is my half-birthday and this boy wants to eat some damn cake! 😊

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